neonman asked:
$10 Wine
$10 Wine
Oh, give some of that $10 wine
I search the aisles, top shelves too
Nothing is spared, my quixote quest
for some very fine… $10 wine
Perhaps you like the malbecian dance
or even the cabernet shuffle
H*** I don’t even mind a varietal 2 step
as long as it doesn’t require a cash advance
Now these winey purveyors, they think their hot!
longish noses with frost bite tips, down they look
Spewing $10 words…tis winespeak you know
and no credit line… try to park in their lot!
No, I’m sticking with my $10 wine
my paletted tongue says it’s mighty fine…
So take your airs, your pricey wares and go
I be sipping now…I bought a whole case!.
Carney
Words very well put in a remarkably assertive tone. Some guys maintain their so-called standard by not drinking wine from brown paper bag or those on the shelves of grocery shop. But i find this ten dollar wine drinking even hotter, rugged and raw— very manly. Kinda raw animal craving! It might not be mighty fine…but it’s mighty ****. lol
Comment by Damsel in Distress — March 17, 2008 @ 7:55 am
Oddly enough, it was kinda sexy, I agree with Damsel. Weird…
Comment by SweetChildOMine — March 20, 2008 @ 12:35 am
Ah the afternoons (spilling over into the evening) I’ve obliterated with $10 wine. Yes, indeed, mighty fine.
And maybe this Monday should be spent the same way, now, do I have ten dollars…..
Comment by Alobar — March 21, 2008 @ 7:40 am
Mighty fine poem. Will you fill pass it around?
Comment by Marguerite — March 22, 2008 @ 9:14 pm
Thou, poor man of inert gas,
Shall never find where doth the Margaux.
Ne’er to sip of Chasselas.
Thy heart it aches, thy nose it burns.
Thou shalt never know which way the Sauternes.
Comment by Jeff L — March 23, 2008 @ 9:49 pm
a10 dollar wine
has a cork
that’s fine
one could do worse
thunder-bird
now that’s a curse
try jo-jo pruem
at $25,
now that surely is
a fine wine
so drift in time
with a 10 buck wine
it’s all the same
but the taste
cool poem you wrote
ghost
Comment by ghost — March 27, 2008 @ 6:15 am
Had an ancestor, first name (true) Vintner…I’ll call him and inquire.
You’re invited to our deck, this evening! BYOB
Comment by Bayard Lady — March 29, 2008 @ 2:09 pm